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About This Passage
Cynthia Rylant writes for first graders, but her sentences are master-class examples of compression — three concrete details and one startling simile carry the entire image. Imitation here teaches the difference between description that stacks adjectives and description that selects them.
Sitting on the steps was the shabbiest cat Henry had ever seen. It had a saggy belly, skinny legs, and fur that looked like mashed prunes.
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Narration Prompt
Summarize this chapter, then explain what you think the author most wanted the reader to notice or feel. What techniques did the author use to push you toward that response?
Discussion Questions
- Henry's father uses the language of contempt for the cat — 'shabbiest,' 'a disaster' — while performing every action of welcome: opening the door, carrying the cat in, pouring three bowls of milk, studying it carefully. What is the author saying about how human kindness actually presents itself in real life? Whose model of love is more honest — Henry's enthusiastic 'It has to be a stray,' or his father's grumbling care?
- Rylant compares the cat's fur to 'mashed prunes.' She had every brown thing in the world available — chocolate, mud, mahogany — and chose perhaps the least flattering. What is gained by an unflattering simile? Why is it more powerful than 'as soft as silk' or 'as dark as chocolate' would have been here?
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Vocabulary Builder
Item 1
in the most run-down, neglected condition possible
Item 2
drooping under its own weight from looseness or weakness
Item 3
an animal living without an owner, often by accident or abandonment
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