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Wilson Rawls places this passage right after the most embarrassing chapter of Jay Berry's life — the sour mash, the lost britches, the castor oil — and suddenly the whole page opens up into sky and bronze wings. Copying it teaches trailblazers how a writer uses a 'reward passage': the hero has suffered, so the author gives him (and us) a moment of pure Ozark beauty. Notice the verbs — gobbling, beating, rose, blinked, winged — each one builds the motion of the flock rising. The 'green blanket' and 'burst of fiery bronze' show two kinds of seeing: the wide soft ground and the sharp metallic sunlight cutting across it.
To my right, from far up on a hillside, there was a loud gobbling and a beating of heavy wings. Then up out of that green blanket and into the sky rose a flock of wild turkeys. I blinked my eyes at th...
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Discussion Questions
Narration Prompt
Retell Chapter 10 in four or five sentences. Be sure to include Jay Berry's morning-after sickness, Papa's gentle sickbed conversation, Daisy's Red Cross nursing with the castor oil trick, Rowdy's dug-out hole under the trough, and the trip to Grandpa's store where the plan to visit the library is born.
Discussion Questions
- Papa says, 'if a fellow can learn something through experience when he's young, he doesn't ever forget it.' What does this tell you about how Papa sees his job as Jay Berry's father?
- Daisy's castor oil 'trick' works because she knows exactly how Jay Berry's stomach will react. What does this moment reveal about how well the twins know each other?
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Vocabulary Builder
Item 1
the loud rapid call a male turkey makes, especially in the morning
Item 2
striking again and again with force; the motion of wings pushing down on the air
Item 3
a wide covering that lies flat over something, like a layer of forest over a hillside
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